@Coolbreeze here is my review of your work. If you would like I have through notes on changes that I made. I only wrote out the first section as the rest of the song just repeats the same chord progression. Lovely tune though. Here is the midi and PDF of my review, perhaps at some point I can (or whoever) can make this into a solo version!
Dynamic Sunset Review.mid (1.2 KB)
Dynamic Sunset Review - Full Score.pdf (39.3 KB)
If I didnt explain something clearly enough let me know or if you want my notes/thoughts on making it into a solo arrangement.