pretty good, that middle section with the change in rhythm is a bit weird but still playable. I main question I have for you is during the last section (measures 54-end). Most of the rest of the piece up til this point had the same rhythm in the bass line but here the bass line does not seem to follow as much of a pattern to me as it does in the rest of the song. Nothing wrong with this but just feels a bit odd to play. I think measures 58 and 55 are very similar but one has a different bass line. Perhaps this is all that makes this section feel weird to me. I also wonder about measure 12, I want to keep playing the A harmony note until the third beat of the measure instead of quickly changing to the G# on beat 2, but thats probably just me. Lovely tune though!
Aside from this, what anime's are you watching this season @tomorning? This is one I was watching just because of its association with oriemo.