This sounds nice but cant give any criticisms because I cant really find the original to compare. Really like the capo 4 version and would personally never play the other version ever. Really good arrangement yet again, what would you like to have comment on?
From what sounds nice to me there is just a few things I could mention:
Measure 3 seems a bit weird to harmonize the melody (?) with only the g note in every beat, but dont know the original so this might be correct.
I like adding a grace note from A to B in the last measure of page 3 of the PDF (the first beat of this measure grace note from A to B)
About it from just playing it a few times and may not be correct when compared to the original piece.